the percussion in the very beginning feels a bit empty/jarring, I appreciate the atmosphere you've created, something seems off with the reverb at around the 1:45 mark, maybe too much? or maybe the pad is overpowering? there's a lot going on instrumentally, but it all feels like it's missing something right in the middle to keep my attention, some kind of melody to bring it all together. I do like the break down at the 5 minute mark, but after hearing it the entire song almost feels like an intro/interlude/outro, almost as if it can be split into 2 or 3 different songs. Overall the mix sounds pretty good. Other that it was an immersive 7 minutes.
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Music Feedback · Created 2 weeks ago · Status ANSWERED
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well, i need some opinions and feedback, i made this instrumental yesterday (i started it like a few weeks ago but i left it behind), i dont really know which genre is, i just know its like some acid jazz/r&b or neo soul, the beat changes at the minute 5. its 128 bpm, plus, im in the process of making an album, this is the fourth beat i made, the other three are rap (two of them) and rage trap, im really trying to make my personality in music and i dont have nobody to give me feedback of my beats (i'll write the lyrics on holidays and record them in summer or at the end of the 10th grade), thanks for reading all this xd, here it is the unfinished song:
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only 1:51 in and i was floating. this personality genre of music is a gem.