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i started yesterday and have no proper useful advice that I could give but this is fire and I enjoyed it

The track isn’t really within my usual artistic lane, so I’ll focus strictly on the technical side. Overall, it’s well executed and clear. The mix feels controlled and everything functions properly in its current state. However, I think it would benefit from more deliberate dynamic control at this stage to reinforce the groove and shape the movement more in...

hey bro, the beat sounds good but i think the vocals could be mixed better. i chose that name to the song because, first of all, i didnt know what to put, second of all, i wanted it to be something about love for the album so😂

the percussion in the very beginning feels a bit empty/jarring, I appreciate the atmosphere you've created, something seems off with the reverb at around the 1:45 mark, maybe too much? or maybe the pad is overpowering? there's a lot going on instrumentally, but it all feels like it's missing something right in the middle to keep my attention, some kind of me...

only 1:51 in and i was floating. this personality genre of music is a gem.

Some magical memories you should add lyrics that would be great theme "escape from this matrix entering on your magical world"

i think the vocals are too loud, the mix could be better, anyway, get this on soundcloud bro ts hard🔥🔥

mixing is clean ash flow on point too ngl its smooth

It's super dope👏👏💯

It's cool man that rhythm beats also wow🔥👊🏻

for me its a little bit quiet, idk why, i dont know why but the drums part are louder than the voice when you talk, but overall its a good song

Very chill, I enjoy it. I do kinda want an "unexpected" energetic part tho, but that's subjective tbh so do what you will with that overall, the main crit I have is that it's a bit too consistent throughout the track, but that's just me trying to find something you can improve, I actually didn't get bored listening to it. I think it could add some replayabi...

This is actually pretty good I can’t lie. The vocals are pretty clear which is great. It’s a dark rnb with some rap induced, I like it

i am sorry, i am inexperienced :c, but it does sound awesome, great mixing and really nice melodic line, great lyrics too.

Is this on platforms? legit got distracted while listening to it and thought it was playing from YouTube music lmao, wanna add it to my library The amount of small details with the vocal doubling, background vocals, etc. is great, the vocal processing is really tight, the variation between the different sections keeps it interesting maybe a bit more stereo...

I like the 2nd voice u use rather then the other if u keep the whole track in that voice i think u got a whole new track that would hit in a harder way

This lofi track is really smooth. The beats are clean and your voice blends perfectly with the vibe. Super relaxing layla it's soo goood 🔥

Definitely dark rnb I love the vibe of it would definitely turn down the reverb a tad

Actually really ******* nice, I'm **** at genres but I would say it's a mix between atmospheric and pop, the vocal chops in the bg give it a pretty rich feel, I think it progresses well, too, it doesn't get boring Honestly, it doesn't seem like it needs improving it sounds release ready

I think the vocals are a tad bit too loud in the beginning compared to the instrumental I’m not sure if that was intentional but if I were you I would certainly lower them at the beginning or turn the beat up.

@ne0xss_57194 fyi ^ - your latest post found a bug so the bot didn't remove it but it's 1 for 1 now

Sounds good but I think it could do with more stereofield, right now it sounds very mono

@ne0xss_57194 Woah! That's cool. You still gotta mix and master right.

@ne0xss_57194 Sounds great. Raw instrumentals tho.

Sounds great, the kinda voice thing at the start that sounds like a phone call sounds way too loud though, it threw me off because the rest sounds so well mixed Are you doing some sort of eq on your background vocal chops you sometimes do? they sound different in a way that they don't quite mesh properly but I can't put my finger on exactly

I actually added this to my liked tracks on YouTube music because I think it's that good... The only thing I'd say honestly is cut the whole intro thing, because frankly you have such a strong track from 27s, you just wanna hook people straight away - I listened on the Spotify link first but because I don't have Spotify it kinda played a "sample" of the midd...

This sounds hardddd. It’s so freaking good. The emotion in this sound is absolutely incredible. It is so beautiful. You did amazing on everything. Great job keep up the good work.

honestly my main feedback would be to make the song progress and change more, it stays too similar throughout the track - but maybe that's what you want with that genre so this could be useless feedback. I normally like a kinda build up of some sort, or a part of the song that's a "phrase" (eg. a kinda chorus but doesn't need to be lyrics it can be accoustic...

Unless it's intentional it sounds like you've got quite a lot of distortion when it gets loud, you might benefit from lowering your levels to reduce that, it normally happens when you're sending stuff too loud into effects/plugins

This gives me massive gospel vibes, and sounds very good quality wise - the vocal performance is ******* awesome I honestly don't think this is something you can or should try to constantly improve, the beauty in this kinda track is it's honesty